I like this page, but mistakes and flubs abound. Can you find all of them?
- wrong line inked in speech balloon in first panel.
- blot in the word “moose” that I dipped my hand in and smeared onto Iowa’s hair.
- Suki is missing her camera strap in the same panel.
- Iowa is missing her neck in the bottom tier. I inked in black over the pages of the book to show where it belongs– I will either have to fix this panel or draw her a black turtleneck in the rest of the comic.
- small mismark on the man’s face in the same panel– I will use the opportunity to get rid of the lines over his eyes and make them small and beady.
- ????
Oh well– there’s nothing wrong here that can’t be fixed.
a cartoonist in Kekionga 