minicomics live 5–post 34 (page 6 inks, revised)

garagesale-page6-inks2There, that’s better.  Suki and the moose are no longer floating in air, but standing in a weedy late summer yard suggested by a few lines drawing with two different pens, and I added a panel border.  This means, of course, that I will need to add at least two more on two different pages elsewhere in the story, but that shouldn’t be a problem.  I’m sure there will be some other places where borders will be interesting or useful.

The other problems with this page, principally the fact that Suki’s head is way too small in the same panel that’s had all these other issues, will have to wait until after the pencil is gone to be corrected.

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